Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm The Other Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by choclatangel, Apr 21, 2006.

  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking over my shoulder always praying you'll come over
    Knowing in my heart that you haven't even told her

    I'm the other woman even though I said that would never be me
    Didn't think I would get caught up it was only suppose to be a drink

    But you charmed me and warmed me with the thought of something new
    A sexy black man with no children, a career and lots of loot

    The perfect yin to my yang with just one corckscrew
    A wife at home but who cares she wasn't with you

    We went on a couple of dates and had a good time
    When you can't be with me I just keep pressing rewind
    To remember all the reason why you make me feel sublime

    It won't be long before we get caught, we're gonna slip up one day
    Lipstick on your collar, perfume in your clothes, reciepts from dinner
    who knows???

    What I'm doing is wrong but I can't seem to let you go
    You should just quit playing games and let you wife know

    Never had a man treat me this good wish everyone woman could
    Be free to explore and find that man who will open doors
    And never ignore her true feelings and more

    Maybe I should just call and tell her what's been going on
    Show her that with me is where you truly belong

    Our love is too strong to just let it go
    So leave her alone and maybe WE can grow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Treated me kind , so wonderfully but in reality there is another she
    his wife one whome he will keep , beware of the broken heart that creeps
    maybe he will stay or maybe he will go , it's time this you must know
    one day of fun ova a simple drink without thinks his charm came in a blink
    true love is being faithful beyond all secrets , often seem trap in da closet
    awaiting the next time mixing emotions is like doing time , maybe someone
    will awaken and tell da story but right now da other woman of glory

    I feel ya on this i was once in a triangle between a love and a lover ..........
    tyte drop well felt took me back to them days .
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the wind blows...he goes..
    If he leave her for you, be a wise woman and leave your door open...
    for he will soon exit.
     
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    FloReal916 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so feeling this!! I am in this situation right now and we have been having this relationship for over a year now and I am so trying to let go but it trully is hard! Thanks. Good Drop Poet!
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow....a real tight drop...excellent visuals...beautiful rhyme scheme...I just followed along like watchin a reality show...
    great capture of a affair...
     
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