Black Poetry : I'M, STARTING.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kemetstry, May 17, 2007.

  1. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I'm starting to hear the music again
    I'm starting to hear the song
    The one that had escaped me
    for oh so very long

    I'm starting to feel the rhythm again
    That syncopated beat
    The one I use to love
    that sounded oh so sweet

    I'm starting to see the light again
    That streams out from the dark
    I almost hear the song birds sing,
    canary and the lark

    I'm starting to hear the words again
    rising from the dead
    More than just a whisper now
    bouncing in my head

    I'm starting to get my style again
    It doesnt seem so forced
    Like the one that left me
    Like we were divorced

    The ink is starting to flow again
    and now it's not a fight
    And thus I now unsheath my pen
    and let me start to write


    by kemetstry
     
  2. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: Love is in the air? Take a good whiff, and let it marinate your senses. B-utiful:spinstar:

    :hearts2:

    :picture:
     
  3. karma55

    karma55 Active Member MEMBER

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    Write on writer! Write on!!!!! Very nice piece!!!!
     
  4. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thanx

    Glad you all like it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece made me envision the releasing of a dove. Very serene and sweet.
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

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    Kemetstry:
    Your pen has truely been flowing nicely.
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My friend,

    your prose is tight and the thoughts carry me...I am glad I visited today...Good to read you again, poet....:welldone:

    oh yeah...right back at'cha :bully: :)
     
  8. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Where you been hiding broski? :geek: :toast:
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes yes

    feeling the spirit man

    and it's back

    man don't lose it again

    don't let nobody take that spirit from you

    including your own self

    peace Kem

    ONE love
     
  10. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    yea kem...
    reclaimation, redemption, ascention...hope.
    Im really feelin this piece...nice flow, nice rhythm...

    I remember having days like this....pen flows so smooth.
    great write.
     
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