Black Poetry : i'm sorry...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Aug 12, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m sorry
    If my screwing you
    Left you feeling like a
    “Used
    and Abused”
    YOU
    But you knew what I wanted to do

    I’m sorry
    If my actions
    Left you reacting like
    “The love of my life”
    …a future wife”
    when all I wanted was a moment in time
    to wine and dine a Nubian Queen
    Before doing that “Down right Dirty” and Nasty Thing

    You know

    I’m sorry
    If yesterday
    Found you singing
    “I love you” tunes
    and thinking
    “I do’s”
    when all I really wanted
    was a “sex moment” with you

    Does it help to say

    I’m sorry
    For the tears you’ve shed
    While wondering WHY
    It had to end this way
    Today

    This day:(

    I’m sorry.
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    uh huh

    hit it then quit it :lol:

    tyte flow baller tyte flow

    pd

    :toast:
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang

    been there
    done that
    felt that
    caused that


    what a tight way to put it

    Natasha
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was poetically painful truth. But very well said, even if maybe too late for that poor date. PHEW!
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm... er-uh... well...

    i'm a lil shocked by this piece. not by the
    message... but! you mean to tell me that
    grown women are still equating sex w/
    love/relationships??!! :eek: alrighty then!
    imma leave that one alone. :lol:

    thanks for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  6. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, it happens...you know that sex is emotional for us!!!! You know that some women give all of their LOVE when committing the ACT and don't know how to LAND when the ride is over!

    Keeping it real.

    Redlady
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyght scribe poet
     
  8. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eish!!! eish!!! eish!!!-**** brotha, like, ****!! I suppose us sista's know this-but we never really want to hear it ! ()-these are meant to be two hands covering my ears!

    Phew! I'm wiping sweat off my forehead. I just made one of my work mates read this and all she said was "**** a brotha could at least make me believe that he loved me at some stage of the night!" I don't know, women are in denial but deep down we know..you, see baller, you should know better than screwing with emotional beings (excuse the pun)! but they....

    lo'
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you hit them wit too much baller
    when you 'handle" sometimes it could be too much for them to handle

    the is some gentleman type playa sh*t here poet


    feeling ya depth
    on the "i didn't mean to hurt your feelings but" tip

    DSS

    PEACE
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't condone a man who
    behaves in that manner, but...
    It probably would make some
    difference if an apology was made.
    Especially if he means it.

    On the realness
    Women need to learn to recognize
    the difference between love & lust.
    Often...time will reveal.

    When in doubt hold out!

    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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