Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm so Sorry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Jul 7, 2006.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I swear I never meant it
    to come off like i was trying to
    seduce you that night
    i was trying to get reacquainted
    with an old friend
    i never wanted to see you as an old flame
    I just wanted to chill
    i never thought that the night would become so
    heated
    But I couldn't sit there and look into the same eyes that i fell
    in love with four years ago
    And feel absolutely nothing
    I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN FROM THE CONVERSATION
    I SHOULDN'T HAVE ASKED YOU TO SIT NEXT TO ME
    I should have seen it right there in my apartment
    I couldn't resist the temptation of the beauty that is your soul
    The one man who could have me at any time
    I don't know why I tried in the first palce
    the song we can't be friends is so true
    because I can't see or hear you without falling in love with you
    you are engaged and she is so beautiful
    She doesn't deserve this and
    The thing is you don't really want me but we did what we did
    As much as I love you you can't be with me because she needs you
    More


    To be continued...................
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice scribe soulful. Can't wait to hear the rest.

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    oh my my my !!
    temptation and feeling crossing into one heated night

    love to hear the rest of this whewwwwww
     
  4. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can't really wait to tell the rest
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    part two is complete
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice writes Soulful2006:spinstar:

    :picture:
     
  7. samson4real

    samson4real New Member MEMBER

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    THE GREAT ONE WILL ALWAYS BE THE GREAT ONE,GREAT TO THE PERSON THAT FORGIVE AND FORGET SOME ONE BAD ACT FOR THEY ARE HERO AND THEY SHALL BE CALL THE WISE ONE.
    AM A GREAT SINNER DOES NOT MEAN THAT I WILL DIE IN SIN HOPE AND BELIEVE IN GOD WHAT EVER YOU WANT SHALL GET TO YOU.BECAUSE ONE DAY YOU WILL GIVE ACCOUNT OF YOUR WORK.
    PLEASE MY BROTHER AND SISTER BE YOUR BROTHER KEEPER AND BE HAPPY THAT YOU ARE BLACK,FOR BEENING A BLACK IS A GREAT HAPPINESS TO ME.AM PROUD TO BE A BLACK.FOR GOD KNOWS THE REASON HE CREATED YOU AS BLACK.ONE LOVE MY PEOPLE
    PEACE OUT

    SAMSON4REAL
     
  8. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the positive response and the love you're sharing I'm glad that your first post was a response to this poem. welcome to the destee family and God Bless you.
     
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