Black Poetry : I'M SO HOT, RIGHT NOW ( Tell Me If You Feel Me)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by FINDLOVEINME, Aug 11, 2004.

  1. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO?
    OUR BODY TEMPERATURE SO HOT, WE'RE DRIPPING IN EACH OTHER SWEAT
    FEEDING OFF EACH OTHER PASSION, EXPERIENCING SEX AT IT'S BEST

    SHEETS THAT WERE BENEATH US, NOW LYING ON THE FLOOR
    SEX SO DAM# DELICIOUS, I' CAN'T HELP BUT BEG FOR MORE

    I, AM, AT YOUR MERCY, AND I DON'T WANT OR NEED TO BE RESCUE
    ALL I WANT TO DO RIGHT NOW IS TO CONTINUE FU%KING YOU

    YES I SAID THAT, AND STILL EXPECT YOU, TO TREAT ME LIKE THE LADY I, AM,
    ALLOW ME TONIGHT, TO FEEL EROTIC AND EXOTIC, BECAUSE THE WATER IS OVER FLOWING IN MY DAM

    THIS IS NOT ABOUT LOVE AND WE BEEN TOGETHER TO LONG FOR IT TO BE A ONE NIGHT STAND
    IT'S ABOUT THE HEAT I SEEK FROM MY LOVER, MY MAN, BABY, DO YOU UNDERSTAND?

    TONIGHT
    I WANT TO BE SCANDALOUS, DOWN OUT RIGHT DIRTY AND NASTY WITH STYLE
    I WANT TO FEEL YOU SO DEEP, UNTIL I MAKE SOUNDS, LIKE THE CALL OF THE WILD

    I WANT TO LIVE OUT THE CHARACTER, IN ALL THE ZANE BOOKS THAT I READ
    TONIGHT I NEED THAT ORGASMIC FLOW TO GO STRAIGHT TO MY HEAD

    IF THE FREAKS COME OUT AT NIGHT, AS THE SONG SAY THEY DO
    THEN, TONIGHT, I WANT TO BE THE FREAK, THAT'S COMING ON TOP OF YOU

    PLEASE TELL ME, IF YOU THINK THAT YOU CAN YOU HANDLE THIS REQUEST?
    OR SHOULD I CONTINUE READING MY ZANE BOOKS AND LET MY FINGERS DO THE REST

    I'M SO HOT RIGHT NOW FOR YOU
    TELL ME,
    WHAT WOULD YOU LIKE TO DO?

    © Copyright 2004 by FINDLOVEINEME
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, you definitely have a knack for choosing the right words. You make your reader say, yea, I know exactly what she's talking about. This piece is so hot, it's still smokin.
     
  3. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU WHAZINANAME,

    THE TRUTH IS WHAT IT IS

    SOMETIMES WE WANT TO MAKE LOVE AND SOMETIMES WE JUST WANT TO
    GET OURSELVES DIRTY
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!!!!! this is VERY :hot:!!!!! Girl, this was off the chain!!!

    :thumbsup::smokin:
     
  5. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you SwtT for your reply :)
     
  6. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte drop :hot: :flamet:! Im impressed once again by ur work. :spin:
     
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    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU BLATINAPOET4U, I LIKE THIS ONE TO
     
  8. gottaluvher143

    gottaluvher143 Member MEMBER

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    this was hot!! I know exactly what you mean about those Zane books, she's a true freak. LOL :welldone:
     
  9. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a brotha need a glass of water after this heat, whew . . . i like your style poet. keep inkin em

    Lyr1c
     
  10. CsBabygirl

    CsBabygirl Member MEMBER

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    All I can say is MY GOD!!!!! that was excellent......I know exactly what you mean about the zane books actually I just got finished reading sex chronicles II and they were wild. :hot: your on fire
     
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