Black Poetry : i'm Sick and Tired

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Jan 6, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some say that its just a mood i'm in
    Others classify it as a shame and sin
    But i know it as my reality
    The way that i've been blessed to see
    i'm sick and tired of the lying status quo
    All this BS has got to go
    i'm angry 'bout our situation
    Of bein' billed as the Butts of civilization
    tired of bein' everythang and havin' nuthin'
    tired of bein' held back and passin on suffrin'
    From one gerneration to the one to follow
    Of a mind and soul that's full and a pocket that's hollow
    If it were a mood it would surely pass
    And i'd move on to the front of the class
    With less percieved suceptibility to crime and disease
    to such illogically lame pronouncements, i say, "PUHLEEZE"
    Scuse me while i uncover you false superiority
    And debunk the myth of my inferiority
    Your hole card is showin'
    And like i was always knowin'
    It's a deuce that aint wild
    So, Huney Child
    Poker face can't help you to deceive and don't try
    To come out with just another bold faced lie
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HERE, HERE!!!

    4reallydoe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said i'm feeling u on dis
    indeed indeed!!!!
     
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    nice flow
    Peace Angel
     
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    If it were a mood it would surely pass


    this line said it all
    this was tyte
     
  6. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset--RICH--Angel--angelicsage

    Thanks for the comments, maybe Yawl know something about this Yawls Selfs.
    It's no mood but rather a call to positive actions.
    Peace and Blessings
     
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