Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm O-u-t

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ayaatee, Nov 7, 2003.

  1. Ayaatee

    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    whispering waves

    wallowing in the shades

    blades of grass

    raspingly

    keeping me

    alert

    berserk, no sir

    controvert

    hurt

    gaping

    infatuation

    anticipation

    let down

    run around

    break

    out

    rising, realizing, reprising

    it was, it could have been, it wasn't

    it doesn't matter

    he won't, he's not, he can't

    take what I don't give...

    I'm Out
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sound Logic

    Sounds good enough to fete!!! :party: :wave:
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooo, I really like this!!!!
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth all the way down..i really like this one...:angel1: