Black Poetry : Im Not Suppost To Hate U This Much

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  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My life has always been
    fu(ked up somehow, but
    I never thought I'd see the
    day it would come crumbling
    down...
    When that day came you
    took me in, but somewhere
    along the line you also managed
    to bring me down...
    If anyone ever got to know
    the real side of you, and
    go through what I went
    through they'd know why
    I fu(king hate you...
    They'd know why everyday
    and night I laid and cried...
    They'd know why I got
    these scars on my wrist...
    You grew me up, you'r my
    blood, I'm not suppost to
    hate you this much...
    You go around telling
    people negative things
    about me, you tell them
    how I was pregnant and
    got an abortion at the young
    age of 15...
    You have no idea how that
    affected me, still to this day
    it emotionally hurts me...
    You never once say how I
    turned my life around and
    at 20 years old with all the
    bull**** I went through I'm
    still going strong...
    You even have the nerve
    to tell people I'm nobody, but
    you know what fu(k that I am
    somebody...I'm not gonna let
    your words hurt me nomore...
    I moved far away to a better
    place and I'm getting my life
    straight...
    Maybe one day you'll see how
    much this nobdoy can be...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again welcome nice emotional drop
    keep moving forward surely sweeter
    days ahead flow on !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt the irate emotions here, keep your head up and just live your life. Strong flow.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt flow...
    stay strong
    faith got you this far...
    build and grow....
    i feel the pain in this...
    peace
    angel
     
  5. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PLEASE READ THIS

    ALL TO REAL VERY WELL WRITTEN VERY VERY VERY GOOD
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sigh*
    Pain is soul deep but the lessons it teaches R deeper
    Much healing for you :grouphug:
    and welcome home :) :wave:
     
  7. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love and feeling my pain
     
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