Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Sep 12, 2006.
I'm not ready
feeling all of this , not ready yet !
take ya time as u let go............
There's always room for improvement, but if someone is looking for a complete overhaul, then they need to find a different mate. One day you'll be looking back at the hurt, well posed piece.
I have been here before dont care to go back
but I have been there. I feel your words though
sis. Sometimes we have to work through feelings
and emotions in our on time and our own way.
No one can tell you how or what your feeln' or
that you should or should not feel that way.
They are your feelings and you can express them
how you please. You expressed them well.
do stuff to you think it's all good like you're just supposed to forget
they need to fully understand why you feel you way you do
and maybe they won't do it again
and when you're ready make nice
you'll let them know until then back the f up
I'm glad I'm not alone on this subject.
I feel on not being ready to give a dawg a bone! Yep it's time you kick the hell out of that dog! Break out the B.B. gun and put a few caps in that *** and after that you'll probably feel better. Fried Chicken is always a good fresh start!
"Keep it movin'
Go on to the next
But I'm not ready yet..."
My favorite lines... i really liked this one... sometimes people do stuff to hurt us and then try to fix when they realized what they did wrong.... yet all the while we haven't healed. Good job conveying your feelings... i loved it!
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