Black Poetry : I'm not ready

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Sep 12, 2006.

  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm not ready
     
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    feeling all of this , not ready yet !
    take ya time as u let go............
     
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    There's always room for improvement, but if someone is looking for a complete overhaul, then they need to find a different mate. One day you'll be looking back at the hurt, well posed piece.
     
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    Sweet baby_face:
    I have been here before dont care to go back
    but I have been there. I feel your words though
    sis. Sometimes we have to work through feelings
    and emotions in our on time and our own way.
    No one can tell you how or what your feeln' or
    that you should or should not feel that way.
    They are your feelings and you can express them
    how you please. You expressed them well.

    Much Luv
     
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    Nice piece:spinstar:
     
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    people

    do stuff to you think it's all good like you're just supposed to forget

    they need to fully understand why you feel you way you do
    and maybe they won't do it again

    and when you're ready make nice

    you'll let them know until then back the f up


    peace
     
  7. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad I'm not alone on this subject.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WILL DO!!!!!
     
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    I feel on not being ready to give a dawg a bone! Yep it's time you kick the hell out of that dog! Break out the B.B. gun and put a few caps in that *** and after that you'll probably feel better. Fried Chicken is always a good fresh start! ;)
     
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    wow...

    "Keep it movin'
    Go on to the next
    But I'm not ready yet..."


    My favorite lines... i really liked this one... sometimes people do stuff to hurt us and then try to fix when they realized what they did wrong.... yet all the while we haven't healed. Good job conveying your feelings... i loved it! :welldone:
     
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