Black Poetry : I'm No Dummy

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my loneliness is hitting me

    like two Miami Dolphins

    in a bad mood

    but the comfort that you're knitting me

    is more than enough to soften

    this dude

    tonight



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U know Howard sometime that hard hit is a wake up
    to a soft side to embrace ...very nice scribe brother..
     
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    And tho you are lonely you are not alone
    The bass of my heart beats to the rhythm of your spirits microphone
    This is original through waves that travel only with the elite
    May your lonliness never be compromised for your peace,
    I see you,breathe you,feel you
    and this presence is not by mistake but by purpose to complete the better half of you:kiss: :kiss:
    Excellent write poet!:terrific: :terrific:
     
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