Black Poetry : I'm Needing You Now

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We agreed that our
    distant romance would
    not be an obstacle

    but…

    it has become
    painful to the point
    where

    I'm needing you now…

    Right now…

    No doubt my soul
    means well and invites
    devotion to live in
    its house

    but…

    what do I do when I'm
    needing you now?

    Right here with me?

    We speak of a togetherness
    that embodies a connected
    bond that should remain

    unbroken
    fettered
    coupled…

    Surely a means to an end to
    complete us in this union
    established over the miles

    yet…

    My heart aches since it
    cries tears of emptiness
    because...

    I'm needing you now

    I ask my mind to fill the
    void that
    being away from you
    has caused…

    Longing for your
    reassurance that all
    will be ok…

    Feelings of
    hunger for your smile
    thirst for your beauty
    obsession with your passion

    consumes me…

    My emotions overflow
    to the brink of drowning
    my soul as

    I'm needing you now
    to

    touch me softly
    &
    hold me tightly
    then
    feel me feel you

    again…

    So my burning desire
    will continue to

    miss you…

    miss us…

    and go on
    needing to love you
    right now…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    o.k

    mr. baby powder blue :lol:

    diggin' the romantic flow

    keep them coming

    pd
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you been in my head dog! I couldn't have said it any betta! but I definitely feel you on this hea!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin' dis big tyme

    ya bringing madd vibes i see and lovin it
    work dem keyz man !!:)
     
  5. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sooo On Point!!!

    Lovin this GQ! You are a poetic genius! :heart:
     
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