Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm Missing You Dad, Happy Father's Day

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm missing you dad
    On this blessed Father's Day
    Your words of wisdom make even
    more sense, as I make my way
    down this path of life.
    Your word was bond. If you said you would
    be somewhere, you were. If a promise of
    help was made, you'd do everything you could.
    You were just that kind of man.
    That no nonsense approach
    that you believed in, applies
    to whatever subject you broach
    Trials and tribulations
    beauty and love
    you and mom gave such good advice
    that I find myself looking above
    and talking to you
    I know you can hear and understand me
    as I still hear and know what you're saying
    in every inkling that I can feel and see
    You're so much more than pleasant memories
    So, to you Dad, I'm taking this time to say
    with all the love that is within my heart,
    Happy Father's Day!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And a very happy one, I might add. He must be very happy, because he can see that his love and teachings still lives in "you"...so who could be happier?
     
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    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a nice Fathers Day Poem Watz.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "he can see that his love and teachings still lives in "you"...so who could be happier?" What a sweet thing to say queentswana. Thank you.
    I'm glad you feel this is a nice Father's Day poem. Thanks Manasiac.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow to dad
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich for your support.
     
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    Heartfelft scribe...deeply
    and yes...they are always with you
    no matter what...

    Beautiful dedication...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sage, yes, that special father's love is with us always.
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Nice flow. A deep and endless bond between a father and daughter is something to be treasured always. :heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, Eisha, and I will cherish that bond we have, always. Thank you.
     
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