Black Poetry : I'm Missin U

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm missin u...
    Cuz u were always there, to put a smile on my face

    I'm missin u...
    U were the 1st person I ever loved n all I thought about for a while

    I'm missin u...
    Cuz I feel the tension of my heart telling me that i still want part of u

    I'm missin u...
    Cuz I want my friend back n I want/need that closeness again

    But most of all, I'm missin u...
    Cuz I still love u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what seem gone is only a step away
    missin u was sweet to say surely one
    hear ya vow and come in a short while
    tyte flowin
    POET OF THE WEEK my sistah gurl whewwwwwww!!
     
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    Such heartfelt reasons to yearn for someone. Touching scribe. Flow on poet of the week!!!!!!
     
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    This is heart felt and sincere.....I am very familiar with this feeling.
     
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    sorry y'all, i had to bring it back. here's pt.2

    I'm still missin u,
    I'm definitely still lovin u.
    I wanna talk, I need u.
    Need to know that u really care.
    That u'll always be there.
    I wanna be around u,
    Know whats up w/u.
    Miss listenin to ur silly a** stories about our friends.
    Miss u askin me what I'd do in certain situations.
    Wanna be flirtatious,
    But I gotta curb these urges.
    The urges 2 be bold, us havin convo's by ur 2way.
    Both of us knowin we have no business to speak like this.
    Both of us lovin it, like it was gold.
    These freakin memories that I hold.
    I cant cope when I dont speak 2 u 4 a long time,
    Always on my mind.
    Dont wanna say sh!* to ya, just wanna hear ur voice.
    Lookin at ya picture cuz I really miss ya.
    I wanted u as my man, but u fu!*ed up that plan.
    I took u as my friend, wasnt ready to say this was the end.
    I've known u for too long, just to let u go.
    So I'm gonna let this flow...
     
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    feeling all of it tooooooooo
    when one missing from heart
    it touchies deeply
    flow on is it more pt.3

    wow !! flowin dem skillz i see today
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol $$Rich$$, there isnt a pt. 3 yet, but that might change in the near future.much love :)
     
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    ok, so i couldnt resist.lol. i dont know if it makes much sense, but here's pt. 3.

    I'm still missin u,
    But yet ur so close.
    Ur w/in arms reach.
    C'mon let me just have u.
    Even if its just for a day.
    U know the language of which my heart speaks.
    Its screamin "I love u, I love u".
    I know u love me too.
    Everything we've said is gonna come out one day.
    It might even ricochet.
    Let's have our moment n make it memorable.
    Nodding our heads in silent agreement...confirmin this is what we've been yearnin for.
    We can't continue to play this "I'm missin u" role, knowin we want much more.
    Should we open the gate n let our emotions run amuck?
    Or should we keep it under lock n key?
    Only allowin visitation rights 4 when I miss u n u miss me.
     
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    oh this was very sweet lovely flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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