Black Poetry : "I'm Married"

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  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    very vivid and detailed... you painted a beautiful picture of heartbreak sealed with a kiss...

    flow on poet
     
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    alright abstract flo on poet, flo on. keep up the good work
     
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    mad tyte this was sprayed beautifully fo real .........
     
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    This was a thing of beauty because you capture the feeling of that one instance so well.
     
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    ****!... that was cold... loved the read...
     
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    that was dope, keep doing ya thing

    but check out my stuff if you get time.....
     
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    I felt like I was standing in the moment with you. This was a very good write. I loved the flo cuz
     
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    i hear ya....


    you just described a feeling i had several time....

    me ""no "' he sorry "'no"'



    me ok...


    he ""She and what we have is "'

    me Not what you dont see in my eyes "'






    and i am married to ?????????


    to whom....?



    god will reveal and time will tell...and i will feel and see in his eyes and actions and most of all soul....


    but i am already married with...



    Jezus ""hesus"'


    and i will only be loved by (thats a poem wrote)



    let us think what is marriage .......well its Holy



    always keep in mind brother and sisters ..
    there is someone mend for you...

    if you have these disire to be with someone..
    other wise god would not give us them...




    Loveauroraflower:heart:.....
     
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    Beautiful write Brother Abstract219....makes one want to :crying:
    :hearts4:
     
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