Black Poetry : i'm lovin' your oven

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my Pillsbury cake continually crumbles

    whenever i fumble

    my attempts to mumble

    i love you

    to your humble heart

    so why do i stumble

    when other guys seem to have the art

    of getting you to happily tumble

    down pat



    love,

    howard
     
  2. BrandNewMe

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    Very sweet...and delightful piece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    warm tenderly done Howard
     
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    Hello Howard:
    Again you make me smile.
    So nice to read you again.

    Much Luv
     
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    smooth short scribe poet
    7/10
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 4everluv :blowkiss:

    thanks guys :shades:
     
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