Black Poetry : I'm Lovin you....

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  1. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m lovin you…

    Pretty Hue’s that flow from the rainbow,
    that peak through clouds
    like the arrow from cupid,
    glare against my eyes,
    and fill my lungs with a loving spirit
    When I take a deep sigh.
    Cause I’m lovin you……
    I’m lovin you from near and far
    Not for what you want to be
    But for what you are.
    my superstar…….
    Struttin down the red carpet of fame,
    No amount of water can douse the flame that
    Roars in my body from head to toe….
    I’m reaping seeds to sow
    For my future looks bright
    Under street lights that flicker
    And if Love is sick, than make me sicker…..
    Don’t want no cure, make it terminal so
    It will stay with me forever….
    What God has put together let no Man or woman
    Sever, but the devil…..he’s clever
    Tryin to throw imitations of you in my path,
    Sporting, coca cola figures, that seduce me only temporarily
    And ordinarily I get caught up in the temptation, but my nose only opens
    For the breath that you breathe, so I just wave at the coke, and give it a smile,
    Cause it can’t compare with the hold you have on me, for your love flows longer than the Nile,
    Or Amazon, I could go on and on, for there is no limit to my expression …..
    I make a point to show you my feelings in our nightly love sessions that take me an inch from immortality
    Far from reality, something unexplainable…….If you can’t grasp what I’m sayin….don’t worry about it.
    It’s un-obtainable….
    Cause I’m lovin you.
    Don’t mistake my jealousy for being obsessive or crazy…..
    Thoughts of you with another brother? Causes my sight to be hazy,
    But cause I’m lovin you….I would let you……….. do you,
    If it makes you happy than I’m happy…..even if it meant some one else….is lovin you….
    My life I live for God, but my soul….I give to my queen….
    My world ,my right and left arm…my everything….
    Cause….I’m lovin you
    Lovin your inner and outer beauty
    Equally…..cause they both stimulate my spirit….
    And if lovin you could get better than this….then the ticker on my clock
    Has quit. For there is only one other place that would be better than being here with you…..
    And that would be standing at God’s side….looking at the perfect picture he drew….
    You loving me……and me…of course I’m loving you…….

    Copyright © 2002 T.L. Stevens
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed this in detail, this was really encouraging and I really appreciate you for sharing this with the fam! two thumbs up brotha!
     
  3. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah this is tyght - for real
    Keep on Scribin!

    1luv
     
  4. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thanks for the kind words, ain't nothing like black love!
     
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