Black Poetry : I'm losing my mind, but I found my heart

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Aug 26, 2002.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just flowing yall....


    My mind is gone
    Since you’ve come into my life
    No longer do I have the ability to reason
    Think things over
    Being led by my intellect
    But now my steps
    Have taken a curious turn
    Where am I going I know not
    Used to directing my own path
    Controlling my own situations
    But now I am driven
    By something
    That I thought I locked away
    So long ago
    Feelings I never thought I would
    Experience again
    Barriers I once erected
    cannot stand against
    the passion that now directs my motion
    got me doing things
    out of the norm
    my structured existence
    has been replaced
    by unstructured gambles at love
    my mind is slipping away
    my thought processes
    has been altered
    mental synapses
    give way to heartfelt desires
    painful memories in my mind
    replaced by
    irrefutable passions of the heart
    transforming me
    into that person I used to be
    before the hurt and rejection
    before the disappointments
    taking me back to a time
    when I knew how to love and receive love
    when I trusted in love
    and wasn’t afraid of love
    love recaptured
    I give over to its rapture
    Giving it another chance
    In this present romance.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da mind send the sign of love to ya heart and transform
    da true love inside ya soul .......well scribe poet!!
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    many times we let our minds keep us from the matters of the heart........Thanks for the read Rich Man!!
     
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    indeed Bishop da mind get lost in da mist of transaction
    yet da heart lay ever so humble but when they mix it's
    all love (i was once told da heart is powerful den da mind)
    that's how true love is born.........flying high now !
     
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    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What can I say but LOST and LOVIN it !!!!!
    :D
     
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    You can try to fight it...but love always come through in the end...glad that you finally let it in! nice flow bishop.
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin' the current from your
    "just flowing yall...."
    Thanks for sharing.

    Scribeaboutit! It helps
    Coco :heart:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm with coco on that...very nice bishop. keep on scribin', as i continue to read you.
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyght flow poet
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh man

    you on that thang again huh????





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