Quiet Poetry Lounge : Im leaving

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cathy916, Apr 28, 2003.

  1. cathy916

    cathy916 New Member MEMBER

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    Please Dont Murder Me


    I ask you for what ever it's worth
    I beg you although I no it hurts
    We loved and now we can't love no more
    But is that reason to kill me!!
    What we had was good
    What we felt we lost
    Still is that reason you should kill me

    Killing me wont solve all your problem
    It well only have you answering to our father
    What can I say, what must I do
    To not live in fear and running from you

    Please dont murder me

    I have to tell you, and
    This may strike a nerve
    But my days without you were a blessing from above.
    So I tell you do what you may
    I well not fall down
    At all this day!!!!
    Please please don't don't murder murder me me

    Cathy Lorree Harris
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when it all go bad
    many seem to lose
    their head
    but why must it be
    please let it be
    move on stay away from me
    don't kill theirs no thrill
    only lonely chills
    I fear not at all

    well felt flow don't murder me........
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Never let an aggressive man know when you,re leaving. Just go and dont look back. Be safe!!
     
  4. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    cathy916

    This time when you leave
    Don't even give him time to breathe

    This time...when you leave
    Don't give him time to roll up his sleeve

    This time when you walk out the door
    Don't look back or he'll give you more

    More of that insanity love
    Which isn't nothing but a brutal fist club

    Your future is so bright
    So run...run with all your might

    Don't wait for the "I'm sorries."
    Don't even wait for any **** apologies

    Don't grab a fist full of money..not even a wad
    As Sister Ashanta poetically said..."Take it to the mountain and give it to GOD"


    :thanks: for sharing

    :grouphug:
     
  5. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh man this was deeeeeeeeepppppppp Monetary I liked that little flow right there and they are all right cathy just get up and leave no sense in waitin peace and blessins keep flowin
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was well felt thanks for sharing ... :angel1:
     
  7. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if he has threatened to murder you, i can suggest 2 things. one you leave his *** in the middle of the night while he is sleeping or two get the police involved. advise them that he has threatened to kill you and you do not feel safe, and that you would like them to supervise while you get your things and go. also ask for a police report, so you have a record of what went down. i wish you luck, please be safe.
     
  8. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a good poem... ive never read a poem on this subject before... very creative... although i get the feeling that it might be non fiction... if so, my thoughts and prayers are with you...
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This did flow as if it was describing a real experience. This must be a very scary feeling, like you are softly begging for your life. I hope that all is well with this poet.
     
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