Black Poetry : I'm Just Breathing...

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  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    My day was tiring.
    Filled with preparing solutions to other peoples problems
    Which has become a daily occurrence
    That my mind finds far from stimulating.

    So it starts its wondering.
    Planning its evening
    Based on the energy found on the conclusion of this weeks end
    And it structured far away from any sort of evening entertaining.

    It's all based on a feeling.
    A feeling that fills my mind,
    Transporting its thoughts to a position that involves me,
    And of course in toe with she,
    Laid eventually in a still state of positioning.

    And for once it didn't start with us kissing.
    But with us coming home with that synced feeling that
    Within each others arms
    Will be were we find the importance of the 'art of chilling'.

    So then our evening begins.
    While removing the clothes that were required by our paid worlds,
    Questions and enquiring on whether the day
    For each
    Came to an encouraging end,
    Which temporally replace the build up to us retiring.

    But comfort is also found in other ways.
    As our most intimate conversations are held in silence,
    As found is our place of rest
    With my chest as your base,
    Where your head can finally take rest.

    And from this position I believe I was made for you.
    Because when we find each others breathing times
    The sync of my heart and your mind a lined,
    The feeling at that very moment for you
    Knows that my love for you is true.


    By Dubb'l yoo T
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes so just inhale and exhale......breath
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As simple as breathing, love is like this when you're simply enjoying the other's presence. How beautiful.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back for more luv...
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inhaling the warmness of this piece...thanks watz for allowing me to capture what I missed. :em4500:
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes! I missed this one as well! Excellent depiction of two souls becoming one just by being.....
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :love: thats hot
    yes indeedy :)
     
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