Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm In Love With You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, May 27, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As we move in passion’s rhythm
    Your inner flesh so warm and wet
    I’m in love with you
    Exploding together
    From this wonderful thing
    We are compelled to do

    With each kiss
    Each touch
    Each penetrating stroke
    Time passes at its own erotic pace
    We’ll tell a lover’s story
    Not in words
    But in the smile on our face
    Yes my angel
    I’m in love with you

    We moan and we breathe
    Together so sweet
    We scream each other’s name
    Since I’ve touched the depth of your soul
    Nothing is the same

    I’m in love with who you are
    I’m in love with what you do
    I love what you bring to our world
    I’m so in love with you

    And when the sun rises
    Hours after the loving is through
    We’ll wake in each other’s arms
    I’ll still be in love with you

    BE
    © 2002
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and when the day is done
    and when my life is through
    when I return to dust
    I'll still be loving you


    :heart:

    a
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was pure lovin and u scribe it so well BE......... say dem words
     
  4. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is what I be talkin bout... P

    :heart:

    Shade
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww

    Sweet sweet love :love:
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why touch all our hearts so deeply!!!!!! Perfect Expresion of LUV.... AMAZING!!!!!!
     
  7. jerseyy22

    jerseyy22 Member MEMBER

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    in luvs

    see that's the type of stuff women like me long for...for a real man to say exactly what you just said...i luv it :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome dear jerseyy22 to the love corner of destee's place
    hope u stay and enjoy flows yet to come ...welcome within
     
  9. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** this was sweet. yeah...it made me smile and brought a tear to my eye...sweet!
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i fall in love with this poem.......




    beautyfull just beautifull......poetry

    libertylaida
     
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