Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm in awe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticly_yours, Mar 9, 2004.

  1. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Charming, yes that you are

    Looking at me mysterious

    Straight into my heart

    I’m feeling so delirious

    Just the sound of your voice

    Vibrating in my eardrum

    It’s like I have no choice

    But to fall into your arms

    Your gentle touch

    Against my softest place

    I’m feeling so full of lust

    Yearning for your embrace

    Your sweet tender kiss

    Is all that I need

    I’m in a total bliss

    And it’s taking over me

    Just looking at you

    You’re so beautiful

    Now I conclude

    You’re the mate to my soul

    :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow......sound like love in da air
    dis was very nice and warm keep
    flowing it sweet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It definitely sounded like the love bug bit ya. Sweet flow.
     
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    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    This flow reminds me of me and my boyfriend, it was beautiful scribe on sista!!