Black Poetry : I'm hurting[part 1]

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShortyLove21, Dec 4, 2003.

  1. ShortyLove21

    ShortyLove21 Active Member MEMBER

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    I do not want to talk about it in depth
    I want to stay in my room and keep it to myself
    I am bothered inside
    Yet through it all behind my smile I hide
    I spend many nights eyes full of tears
    I think of how it will end and it is truly something I fear
    I love him with all of me inside
    Yet and still I am hurting inside
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya sorrow da deep pain release just the same
    speak and let one know of da feeling of da heart !!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya pain...
    release and you will feel better
     
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    feeling you on this
    release it in the flow
    much love to you
    Peace
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey shortyLove :welcome: i have not greet you.....
    :look: and its the first time i read sumthing from you...



    but i must say that i swollowed when i just readed this...

    i know the feeling Sweet..


    Stay strong talk about youre hurt with people and with our heavenly father...


    and keep writting.. I feld youre emotion trough the poem.....

    i will be looking for ya... :look:


    HUg Liberty!
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice scribe

    Yo di t sort ad 2 the point, pain is someimes quick and deep.