Black Poetry : I'm Hungry...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by waynethomas, Dec 21, 2007.

  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    I licked…
    Allowing me to please
    This zone right… here.

    You moaned…
    But between each gasp,
    Your instructions to me were very clear.

    I teased…
    And your hips closed down the
    Air between each of my
    Purposely delayed licks,
    Hoping to replace
    Space
    With
    The new contact of
    My lips…
    Which, if recall,
    You gasped earlier to be right… there?

    You duplicated…
    But each exclusive for me
    Continuing multiples of pleasurable releases,
    Synapses of quivers are the only movement seen
    As I watch you
    Lay beautifully before me…

    I don't know about you
    But
    I'm still hungry…
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How eloquently sensual. You created a passionate work of art poet. Awesome write.
     
  3. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang, Now I'm hungry too!!! Tight flow!!!
     
  4. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful, sensual write. I enjoyed reading it. I think i'm feeling alittle hungry too lol. Great poem.
     
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