Black Poetry : Im here

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  1. 4g0tt3n_Canc3r

    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he was sixteen years old
    had a lot more years to grow
    but his life was cut so short
    by hate
    i remember that day
    when my family came to say
    baby im sorry but he is dying
    lyin in that hospital bed
    so i went and said...


    im here,im here
    please stay with me
    im here no fears
    please dont leave

    dont go, dont go
    move away from that light
    im here,dont leave
    dont die...dont die

    he was looking so peaceful
    but i did not want him to go
    I grabbed his hand as he was
    slipping away

    as his machines start beepin
    and the doctors rush right in
    the say theres nothing we can do
    its now in the hands of you-know-who

    i try again,maybe he didnt here me
    so i say it louder as i begin shaking

    im here,im here
    please stay with me
    im here no fear
    please dont leave

    dont go, dont go
    move away from that light
    im here, dont leave
    dont die.. dont die..

    but.. my words could not save him
    and our cries could not save him
    and at that painful day's end
    he was flying in heaven.


    *Rip* "lil walt"

    07-1990__ 04-2007
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your entire heart has reason to smile, for he did not go to another plane alone...he took your love, heart and tears with him.
    Smile in your heart, and he'll smile with you...certainly his spirit is still here.
    Beautiful piece sis...stay strong!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply feeling you ....even as pain set in the joy of his lovin spirit smiles
    on you as you now treasure his days of journey here in life as he now reborn
    into eternal peace i can see him flying upward ....stay strong as sweet memories linger forever and ever , i can feel u deeply .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel that he heard you as you called to him, taking your love with him, as his love will always remain in you. Your emotions are well felt.
     
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    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou for kind words they are very helpful during this time and are aiding in my healing process.
     
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