Black Poetry : I'm here to Please...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by waynethomas, Jul 19, 2007.

  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    Well
    My piece of trim
    My correctly curved young lady,
    How can I please
    Tease
    Make at ease
    You...?

    Would you like the use of
    One two fingers
    One two minutes
    One two lyrics
    To please
    Tease
    Make at ease
    You...?

    Would you like me to undress and fold
    Dash off and go!
    Before I start the use of
    One two fingers
    One two minutes
    One two lyrics
    To please
    Tease
    Make at ease
    You...?

    Do you want me to
    Wait for them to leave
    Take time under siege!
    Then undress and fold
    Dash off and go!
    Before I start the use of
    One two fingers
    One two minutes
    One two lyrics
    To please
    Tease
    Make at ease
    You...?

    So
    What says you...?
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed the rhythmic flow of this sensually playful piece.
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    lol Sounds like you're aiming to please self.
    Didn't leave many options open for a sister.:lol:

    However, I still enjoyed this piece.
    I guess you can say, "I'm pleased.":)

    :heart:
     
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