Black Poetry : i'm full

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, May 20, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's raining
    and i stand outdoors
    feeling the drops
    on my face

    mixing with my
    bursting vessel
    broken from the
    swelling
    my
    wellspring of liquid love...

    the moon is full
    and so am i

    and so i stand outside
    to blend my waters
    with the falling rain

    to let my river
    run free
    and allow heaven's
    rain
    to shower down
    on me

    the rain came
    and i, too, the same...
    in hot, torrential
    currents
    rising/over taking
    me
    sweeping me under
    deeper
    than any rolling
    sea

    forces stronger
    than the tidal wave
    that finally
    floods & captures me
    when i'm lost
    in your sighs
    and the light
    inside your
    beautiful brown eyes

    you
    bring me
    take me
    KEEP me
    full
    and moist
    with honeysuckleluv
    between my thighs

    i'm raining

    Alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic Erotic Masterpiece!

    :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush: Now I don't know about the rest of ya'll but this room is starting to warm up with all these passionate love poems and tales of erotic titilation.
    Loveded it!:toast: You will need this cold beer to cool off I don't think the rain is helping. You go girllllllllll!!!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GURL NOBADY WRITES LIQUIDS LIKE U DO

    LET IT FLOWWWWWWWWW
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautifully sizzlin' expression...WOW!

    BE
     
  5. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Picturesque.

    A beautifully expressed word picture.

    JAH Bless.
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    Splendid love here!!!

    Warm :heart:/
    GQ
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like all your words of the love between two people and how special it can feel..this was beautifully expressed....is it just me Miss A...or have you got a special connection to God's tears....

    K
     
  8. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooohhhhhh my

    I ain't mad atcha ! Go head Girl do yo thang ! :hot:
     
  9. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    er uh...

    :jawdrop:





    (you da woman...no doubt) :heart:

    S~M
     
  10. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    RED ALERT

    Hot as pepper dis was bang bang!! Alyce ....tyght flow sis...:hot: :hot:
     
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