Black Poetry : Im Free

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't grive for me, for now i'm free,
    I'm following the path God laid for me.
    I took his hand when I heard him call, I turned my back and left it all.
    I could not stay another day to laugh,to love,to work or play.
    Now that i'm gone please don't be sad always think about the good times we had.
    Please don't cry because i'm gone, I knew how you felt your love was strong. Task left undone must stay that way I found that place at the close of day.
    If my parting has left a void, then fill it with remembering joy.
    A friendship shared,
    a laugh,a kiss, oh yes these things I to will miss.
    Be not burdened with times of sorrow, I wish you sunshine of tomorrow.
    My life's been full, I've savored much,
    good friends,good times, a love one's touch.
    You sat by my bed from the day I got sick,
    you stayed by my bed when my heart took that last tick.
    Perhaps my time seemed all to brief, don't lengthen it now with undue grief,
    lift up your heart and share with me, God wanted me now He set me free.
    caramelpython 03/10/03
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh wow...
    a spirit set free..
    let it go it will always be there..
    and shine..a spirit set free...
    A spirit set free unto thy wind..
    Glide with ease
    As it flows…
    To da pearly gate…
    High up in da sky
    Don’t cry…
    It spoke I be ok….
    I see and hear just da same
    My presence is there…
    My love still grow…
    A spirit set free unto thy wind…
    up in da sky he fly...
    oh how he so free..
    A spirit set free unto thy wind..
    grace you with a touch...
    an Angel's wing..
    how he fly with ease....
    A spirit set free unto thy wind..
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so sweet and sad too!

    This sounds so much like a piece that was read at my cousins funeral.
    This would be so good for someone missing a loved one.
    You have indeed have a gift!
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was mastered so well tyte scribe
    free free......wow
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    many blessing
    this is a nice
    poem you have compose
    Peace
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brought a tear here

    a funeral piece,
    how sweet,
    left the world,
    to grief.
    but gave love,
    so they could leave............(spiritually touchin')
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful, inside and out...
    :crying: Im crying but smiling, because
    I just lost someone recently.
    Thanks for the words of wisdom.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!

    Iwrote this for a family member who passed away this past month. I just ried to view it from his eyes as he lived his life. I enjoyed reading your responses to it.
     
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    this was very moving...
    and inspirational...we should all live our lives
    so that we can go in peace, and know that
    we are truly free and everyone who we've
    left behind knows it too...and although in
    grief...they are also at peace...
    Beautiful flow.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spread the word my sister and TY TY TY
     
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