Black Poetry : ****, I'm fly

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NicoleM, Apr 4, 2003.

  1. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****, i'm fly
    it's so chill that i
    can lay up in my bed
    smoke trees that I buy
    'til i'm high
    walk around the house
    not thinking about no spouse
    butt *** naked
    all criticism & opinions deflected
    being creative & getting wasted
    loving this freedom I've tasted
    sexy ***
    chillin
    blowin and
    listenin
    to Pac, D'Angelo and India Arie
    Do you have any idea how cool it is to be me
    I got my **** on lock
    and you don't see my *** punching no clock
    and
    i make dreams come true
    deals go through
    i put wind in sails
    and make sure good prevails
    i flash bright smiles
    and twinkle pretty green eyes
    i'm the type of woman
    you either admire
    or despise
    no in between
    no tip toe through the tulips
    no running through a field of dreams
    no illusions
    no confusions
    no unprovoked fusions
    of fantasy
    into reality
    no disillusioned pleas
    to please
    think about me
    if anything
    i can see
    you seeking
    my blessing
    and agreeing
    with everything
    i say
    move i make
    step i take
    wondering how on earth did this woman make
    me fall so hard
    even though we are miles apart
    emotionally
    especially
    considering
    that whole
    woman and man thing
    you know how they say
    a woman can't take
    too much comraderie
    that we filter everything romantically
    and how most people blieve
    we need
    flowers
    shopping sprees
    and fantasy vacations in Belize
    but all my gifts
    put to death that myth
    i'm doing **** independantly
    and there's a whole bunch more
    cold *** mother ****ing
    women just like me

    (c) 2003 Nicole Mitchell
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GO HEAD GIRLFRIEND !!!! thats what I am talking about , know your worth !
    We are woman hear us roar !

    ~Nice read !
    Natasha :D
     
  3. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOT DAMMIT!!!!!

    i'm doing **** independantly
    and there's a whole bunch more
    cold *** mother ****ing
    women just like me
     
  4. MsMercy

    MsMercy Member MEMBER

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    That was tight

    Girrrlll.....


    That poem was off the chain. I could just see the poem in my head and i enjoyed it very much. You got your **** together for reall...so crisp.

    much love,
    mercy:D
     
  5. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys....

    Ms. Mercy...your signature is on point. I wonder if you know how on point that statement about Mercy really is.
     
  6. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HELL YEAH...........

    LIKE YOU LIKE ME
    EXISTING INDEPENDANTLY
    I ROLL I SMOKE
    I PUFF MY TREES
    I LIVE AND I LOVE AND
    FULFIL MY OWN NEEDS
    HEAR MY NAME WHISPERED
    IN A BREEZE
    GO NINI - GO NICOLE
    GO ALL OF US
    TRULY REPRESENTIN
    CUZ WE JUST
    BEING WHO WE ARE
    JUST US
    PEACE!
     
  7. MsMercy

    MsMercy Member MEMBER

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    thank you much

    Thanks nicole....

    my middle name is Mercy but my first name is Tsitsi, which also means mercy but a lot of people can't pronounce it...only zimbabweans really. I'm sure you're tryin to say it but no matter now people say it, its always wrong...I often get offended when people call me that and they're not my family but anyway... Just wanted to share that lil info...:D

    much love,
    mercy
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sooo decent

    Thats that" **** you im gonna be me " poem. So tight and real girl Im feelin it from my hair folicles to my toes. Keep on being you:toast:
     
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