Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm Filthy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MoEffective, Jun 22, 2001.

  1. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see clearly
    Though I'm Filthy
    Stained
    Unchanged
    And otherwise caged
    From the real Me
    I can not see what it in front of me
    Non do I care to relive my past
    "What's up with That?"
    You're askin me
    "You live so free and happily"
    How ironically
    That what burns so deep within my self-esteem
    Are my dreams
    And child-like scenes of what has been taken from me
    Could it be?
    That through these words of poetry
    One can understand
    My vacant land
    And love me for who I am?????
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I FEEL YA

    ONE MUST LOVETH THEE
    FOR WHOM ONE'S BE
    AND NOT FOR WHAT THEY WANT U TO BE

    I AM WHO I AM AND WHAT I AM TO BE ....
    I FEEL YA !!
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do You Know!!!!

    How long i've bee searching for someone to love me for who I am. I feel the same as you do. for a minute i thought you were talking about me...Like how he know. LOL I can relate sweety...more than you know...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Mo

    don't fret there's somebody for everybody
    just be patient
    somebody will love you for you
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetry "yea"
    Thanks poet
     
  6. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaneak

    Ma,
    You feelin me in more ways than one!
    Thanks for the love. I hope one day
    You and I can put an end to the thoughts of
    comtemplation and start livin a life with love
    that is deeply rooted in honesty.


    I honestly appreciate your words>
     
  7. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Thanks for the input.

    DO YOU AND I'LL DO ME.

    That's all one can ask of another
     
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    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SO'JA

    Good lookin out!!!!



    One day I'll bask in the glow of love.
    Real
    And
    Untainted
    Love.

    One
    Day.............
     
  9. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you liked it.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from one who lives life happily...

    LIFE is LOVE P...LOVE of self creates smiles from within when sticks and stones start cluttering your mental-way. then, again...i'm just a happy fellow. AND THAT'S MY FLOW.

    SELF LOVE, my friend.

    smiles to you.

    One.
     
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