Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm Feeling Senitive 2night

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *From the title: 2 love again...I'm feeling senitive 2night*

    I feel like a dark cloud has just covered my realm,
    letting nothing slip out, or allowing anything in

    It feels so strange, yet I've been there before,
    as the low tides of life, now gathers my door.

    Funny thing about life is that it nurtures all your needs,
    and your soul so often ...it does feed.

    The devil becomes your partner and friend,
    you know, the one that won't let nothing 'out or in?
    the one that don't stop till you reached your end?

    But low and behold...my "spirit" popped in ...
    sat down beside me with the widest grin.

    Wisdom lurks and wait in every alley ...
    cause there's a lesson to be learned down in that valley.

    The darkest cloud has something behind it,
    it's up to you to seek out and find it.

    whenever the battle with "YOU" is won,
    you'll know you've grown ...
    2 Love the right 1
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'my yes how i have grown to know this very tale of love and the right one to share in
    this was a message that touch me deep down in my soul saying HELLO !
     
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    wow i am totally impressed with your pen as usual that was an excellent write
     
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    right on

    sista Queen

    your quote says it all

    great piece poet
     
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    Simply Beautiful Queen

    I wished I had those skills

    Thank You
     
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    Hard to see the light of hope when it's dim, but it's there no matter how faint. Thank you for this positive scribe queent, always a pleasure to read you.
     
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