Black Poetry : I'm Feeling Hot!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aaliyahmonet, Sep 30, 2002.

  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Close your eyez,
    Just visualize,
    Yoself being wit me,
    4 1 beautiful night,
    Imagine sitting by the fireplace,
    All cozied up togetha,
    Keepin each other warm,
    As we talk 2 each other,
    I'm kissin u on da lips,
    As u slowly touchin my hips,
    Rubbin yo hands all across my thighs,
    While i look into yo eyez,
    Touchin u across da face,
    Yo lips sweet and perpetuate,
    Caressin each other,
    Holdin on togetha,
    Me and u,
    Sippin on some wine,
    As we dine,
    Me and u,
    Takin this far,
    2 anotha level,
    As we lie in the bedroom,
    Startin to make luv endlessly,
    My juices start to flow,
    And my body starts to yearn mo,
    While we makin luv,
    With rose pedals all around,
    Feels like eternity in a glass,
    But just da touch of heaven,
    Me and u,
    Ending da night,
    With some luv in between,
    Bumpin and grindin we go,
    Between the white silky sheets,
    As I start to moan,
    I'm craven mo,
    Going deep into yo luv,
    Passion lies between us,
    Me and u,
    And da whole way through.

    Aaliyahmonet




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  2. Sunshyne

    Sunshyne Active Member MEMBER

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    Aaliyahmonet,

    I like that. It is raw and straight to the point. Keep letting it flow. I'll keep an eye out for more of your stuff.

    Sunshyne
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sunshyne:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Hot girl!!!!!!
    Keep it commin.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    closing my eyes
    in a mesmerize
    i see da mask
    of beauty
    i feel da depth of passion
    as it covers da lust
    in sweat i sit
    face 2 face
    as the flame flicker off ya body
    i know the time is now
    where do we start !

    u go gurl dis one is hotttttt!!!!!!
     
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