Black Poetry : I'M FEELIN YOU......love titanic pt. l

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My love
    spoken
    tyme after tyme

    how much i care
    you already know

    when we meet it's a
    compassionate exsplosion
    our hearts race rapidly
    smiles gleam sweetly

    i'm feelin u !

    when morning sun shine
    a beautiful glow flicker off
    the darken skin
    romantic vibes connect
    sweet sounds of morning
    groans heard

    untouched by handz
    yet mental caresses
    cover the soul
    like a blanket of warmth
    tenderly embracment made
    our solo beings become
    the desire of our destiny

    i'm feelin you !

    as my mind roams
    the thoughts of you
    my body go into a
    rapture of (((eark n' gerk)))
    soon i see into the eyez
    of such beauty
    and i'm captured
    like ya willing slave
    a compassionate prey
    a love titanic

    still feelin you ...

    Where will the road end
    on a twisted winding road
    breaking off north & south

    turn left or right !
    my heart guides me
    my emotional feeling
    sho me the path
    as i glide on affection
    the only direction is u
    this when i come to
    reality and see
    I care 4 you through n' through

    pt. ll Frozen in tyme (love's titanic) next...:heart: :love: :heart:
     
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    Melody Active Member MEMBER

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    yeah manes, i'm feel'n you too...*smile*
     
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    Thankz sista Melody
    pt. ll a treat 4 u
     
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    sweet and delitefully remenicent of a love gone by
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz your wordz are graced
    pt. ll is sho nuff a remenicent
     
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    And we, love you as well my brother-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    likewise 1poet your wordz are comfort to a poet's soul
    Thankz
     
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    I M feelin' this one bro' your pen is gettin stronger and stronger...

    is there no limit to it's strength?

    prayerfully not...

    one.
     
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    Thanks Mr.D their is no limit da power of love is above
    something i hold in grasp very close
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O' rich, such love.... leaves me longing for my own similar experience...well scribed my brotha.

    lo'
     
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