Black Poetry : I'm Dying to Love!

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don’t need to tell you
    I don’t have much time
    So you come on over
    Already feel your cold fingertips
    Them long dark scythe nails
    Ripping blood
    Down my spine
    Because you wanted in
    All this time
    And in you shall have
    I’m yours and
    Now I see
    Love be dying
    So let this be
    Our very first,
    And our very last,
    Let me drink poisons from your lips
    Until my glands run dry
    Until my tongue’s wetlands
    Turn to dessert sands
    Now let my heart race
    But don’t stop this beat yet
    Because I’m not finished
    No, I've worked too **** hard
    And these lungs need breathe,
    Hard Scream
    Just one more time
    Then I'll hold on to this last breathe
    And Love you in it like I so very much
    loved life and when it’s gone
    on the Midnight train
    You close my eyes for me
    So I won’t see death’s kiss
    You close my eyes baby
    so I can rest in peace, sleep
    You close my eyes so I can dream
    That this little white light
    At the end of the tunnel
    they all been talking bout
    Is nothing, but
    You.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about til death do us part. Very vivid phrasing, makes us just want to dive into your words. So nice reading you poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa this what i'm talking bout right here u said it best !
    flow head on now !!!!!
     
  4. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich & Watzinaname! It's always great to hear from you.
     
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    sHOOOT...
    WHO U TELLIN?
    nOTHIN BUT A WORD!
    i FEEL u bro!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    such passion in this write flo on my brotha.
     
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