Black Poetry : Im Done

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 19, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    u know its bad
    when u lose most of the love u had
    its even worse when
    the love of ur life sleeps with their friend
    then says im sorry
    (LOL) and does it again

    u told me that it would never happen
    yeah those r famous words that quickly turn into actions
    my hear was whole, now its fractured
    love can be deadly when uncontrolled or mastered

    its coo baby. im not mad, im just done.

    u promised to stay and take it with ease
    i guess promises cant b promised if they were never taken seriously
    late night creeps, long conversations- i was blind or deaf
    so i guess u can have whats left
    memories.. that all i have
    nothin more, nothin less

    its coo baby. im not mad, im just done.

    lonely nights, unspoken thoughts, u know u were wrong
    i thought u were right, but then again i thought a lot for so long
    my tears dried up, theres no need to mourn
    ive already been here b4 anyway- love em, leave u, hearts torn

    i cannot lie, i was mad. but its coo baby, im not mad anymore, im just done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed we feel da madness of one's action
    yet cool to a point to allow self to move on
    yeap!
    i hear ya
    i'm done dat's dat !!

    tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! scribe
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you put up with his lies,
    for such a long time.
    and now it has come,
    for him to recieve sentence for his crime.
    its cool that u ain't mad,
    and that u gave him all your heart.
    but now it is time--for you to from him,
    rip apart.
    bcuz that is exactly,
    what he did to you.
    and i feel what u sayin,
    when u said u done a-k-a through..................
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    You handled that in a very mature manner.... Time does heal...numb the pain of the heart.

    I like this piece...drop a few more.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
  5. simplydeep

    simplydeep New Member MEMBER

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    Now there lies the problem of why some women hate men
    its because they never got the chance to know the trueness of a man
    why?
    cause some of us are triflin'
    take somebody that has potential to be good towards our species and take control of his likin...
    your right for this one sweetie
    let her go
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    throw it out there,
    if it comes back then maybe it was meant to be,
    but if it doesnt then it never was.........


    one love poet...
    i was feelin' that....
     
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