Black Poetry : I'm done with you girl

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chaya Chaim, Feb 15, 2016.

  1. Chaya Chaim

    Chaya Chaim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a freestyle verse that popped in my when I was 21 listening to aaliyah's "we need a resolution "

    "Why do I need to fight for you, you did the dirt you know it's true

    You ain't queen Mary of heaven stop frontin, all you care about is drama, attention and stuntin

    A man like me can't be seen with a grimey girl,I got my resolution, stay away from you and travel the world "
     
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    how a grimey guy call'n out a grimey girl

    specially when you know i rocked yo' world

    :love:

    Thanks for Sharing! Thanks for Inspiring! ... :script:

    Much Love and Peace.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Thank you destee much love back :)
     
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    Greetings Chaya,

    I feel you. Just as a woman needs to know her worth, so does a man and know when its best to walk away...don't even go there. A very wise flow!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco :dance:
     
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    See....i'm liking that line.
    yeah, the poem is good...but that line was the hook.
    Thanks for sharing, Chaya Chaim
     
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