Black Poetry : Im done n I mean it.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jan 3, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yesterday
    we agreed to go our separate ways
    And when you hung up the phone
    I probably woulda called u back, but I left it alone
    Cuz I know deep inside ur not the 1 that I need
    ur just a girl thats been real n been the growth to my seed
    U came into the picture when I needed a path
    to get out of my love for my ex and the karma of my past
    But baby, ur so different, so unlike me
    opposites attract, but u only learned to collide with me
    Its been off and on
    Ur here and then ur gone
    Maybe u'll have an excuse like "baby ur in the wrong"
    And give me speech thats like 10 minutes long
    Oh, how easy it would be to replace you
    but u dont want that, naw... u just wants me to chase u

    But not this time and I mean it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poet flow on
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight flow
    as you continue to grow
    it's hard but
    sometimes ya just gotta go
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flow was madd ripe
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See now that's what I'm talking about. Exercise the power to walk away!
    Go girl!
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall, 'preciate the love...
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you never cease to amaze me, loved the line:

    "opposites attract, but u only learned to collide with me"

    so true
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hard to go sometimes, but life is easier eventually minus that drama...nicely written.
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes we have to
    know when to draw the line
    before someone's heart gets broken...


    nice write


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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