Black Poetry : I'm Done....It's Over

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Aug 3, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm done wasting my time.
    No more calls, only to speak to an automated voice.
    No more emails.
    No more thinkin about u, I'm through.
    It's funny how i took my emotions out the situation.
    And the picture became mad clear to u.
    I'm so over u!
    I'm reclaimin my heart, u almost broke it.
    I couldnt let that become your sole purpose.
    Lovin me means more than losin u.
    But how could i lose someone i never had?
    I chose to love like i've never been hurt.
    You didnt give me ur all, just what u thought i deserved.
    I finally let go and it feels mad good.
    Maybe u'll miss me, maybe u wont.
    I dont know.
    It's a shame, we were once mad close.
    Ya see, i had to do this for me.
    I'm no longer lovin u.
    Maybe one day u'll realize that i was really in love with u.
    And all u had to do was show me that u loved me too.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Over you... overjoyed- very nice, very clear!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw yeah - tight and simple and deep at the same time. OOOO.
     
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    Alls I can say is, I know what you mean...


    The Dreamer
     
  5. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx every1, i really appreciate ur comments. it took me a long time, but i did it!!! much love to all of u :)
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes well said and posed u allow self to be free
     
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    tye flow gurl...i feel you
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thanx $$rich$$ n SwtT, much love to the both of y'all. hey rich, u know what happened 2 serenti?? :)
     
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    "Lovin me means more than losin u. "
    -sarcasm4eva

    Very deep. I'm lovin this flow. I FEEL u on this

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx alize........much love to ya :)
     
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