Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'm Disappointed In You!

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  1. Indys_Finest

    Indys_Finest Member MEMBER

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    That you can look in my eyes,
    and constantly spread lies.
    But yet still professin yo love for me.

    As I play the game with you,
    declarin my love to be true
    But all the while I'm plannin an escape
    Not one day more will I lay with a snake
    So slither yo *** THAT way.

    Tricks are for kids,
    and I guess you've eaten a healthy bowl.
    But lil do you know....
    The last trick wont be played on me.

    I'm disappointed in what you've become,
    goin from business man to bum
    A cracked out, pipe smokin fool.
    Spendin money any way you want to,
    Just not on the right ****.

    On the corner is where you'll sit
    For now on.
    I'm snatchin up every dayum thing.
    But yo tired *** can keep the weddin ring,
    and pawn it for your next meal.
    For only remorse now is what I feel.

    After all these years, I've grown disappointed.
    In the one person I thought I could trust.
    For now I see leavin you is definitely a must.
    You cant bring me down to where you are
    **** around and stay, you'd be sellin MY car
    And I cant have that....

    So take yo disappointin *** and do what you need to do.
    Smoke yo self in a hole, and give up all YOUR goals.
    Cause you definitely wont be takin mine.
    And soon in a matter of time, it will be much too late
    You'll realize your mistakes and want me back.
    And I will have moved on,
    To someone far better then you
    A man with some dreams,
    Unlike your nightmare ridden ***
    Its funny how "once" a man,
    can turn into trash

    Another minute will I not spend,
    in this hell that YOUR in,
    Just know this...
    A woman like ME...
    You'll DEFINITELY miss!

    Copyright 2003
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SAY IT AIN'T SO

    A man with some dreams,
    Unlike your nightmare ridden ***
    Its funny how "once" a man,
    can turn into trash

    So it is... (Tyte)
    Let the pieces fall
    Where they may-

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. PurpleMoons

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    I feel your pain. Done travel that road before. Great insight given
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Indys_Finest

    Sometimes we all do what we have to
    But, it's hard when a loved one is left by you

    Things don't work out like you've planned
    Dreams deferred or left unmanned

    Drugs, alcohol, and addiction
    All can result in dereliction

    Keep on moving inch by inch
    Life's trials and tribulations become a cinch

    And when your burdens seem too heavy to bear
    Just think his Holy Name and GOD will be there

    :thanks: for sharing
     
  5. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum, deep, deep, and deep sista. I like this. :) peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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