Black Poetry : I'm Cool

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jerseyy22, Oct 17, 2002.

  1. jerseyy22

    jerseyy22 Member MEMBER

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    tell me what cha think

    I'm Cool

    I will never fall so soon for a guys interest or affection....
    believe me I'm doing this for my own protection.
    When I fall deep, I fall hard.....
    this is why I can't let down my guard.
    You say I should open up and trust you from the start....
    but see me dealing with trust only gets me a broken heart.
    You say you're that you're different, you're not the cats frm the past....
    you're honest, and sincere and this could last.
    I can't NO! I won't give into this sin....
    tired of playing games with guys because I never win.
    Can't give into you because of your dimples and smile....
    never no more, I've already walked that mile.
    No more playiing victim to the games and the lies....
    no more making this lady cry.
    I really want to get with you but baby I'm cool....
    yeah I've already been through the hard knocks of love school.
    I'm cool.....:heart:
     
  2. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oH My God, man oh man, sounds like someone ripped a chapter out of my book..........i am feelin' this piece down in my bones.....fo real

    keep on keep on
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaay Jerseyy22 :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    :toast: :toast: :toast:

    I feel ya my Sista ... be responsible for you ...
    and do whatcha gotta do ... i'm cool with that too!

    Thank you for joining us and making such a grand entrance.
    Please make yourself at home.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed we all not a like
    some is a pit yeah! ya right
    but keep ya game face on
    from da wrong
    but open ya heart
    see inside da one of notion
    u will feel his motion
    loving is grand
    life is a chance as we walk daily
    so why not try da gift of love
    but keep ya guards up !!

    we all not da same
    we all don't play games
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo jersey youre poem is cool
    and i,m singing brandy,s

    I,m so down with what you going trough!!
    I,m so down and i am "feeling " you

    big up sista!
     
  6. jerseyy22

    jerseyy22 Member MEMBER

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    thankx everybody

    thankx to all who showed me love and welcoming me to the family this one was one of my babies right here....I gotta go back in the cut and find some of my old school stuff....one day I promise I'll be half as good as you guys...you all inspire me to post my stuff :thanks:
     
  7. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    ah snap!

    i love this line "yeah I've already been through the hard knocks of love school." you go girl!

    you need to read my recent post "I ran from love" you're not alone :lol:

    most certainly not :)

    be there done that

    peace

    poeticd :heart:
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hate girls that say i'm cool

    not that i've heard that or anything

    ahhahah

    nice post but i just dont understand
    why girls do that to themselves

    they end up missin out
    gotta remember all guys arent dogs
     
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