Black Poetry : I'm back!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Leaky103, Dec 8, 2004.

  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First, I would like to say that it's good to be back to a real poetry website. Unfortunately, I haven't paid for premium membership status yet but it will be done before the end of the year. For all you poets out there I would like to invite you to an online hiphop magazine website where I am a staff writer. It is up and coming but it's coming together. I wrote my first ever cover story for this months edition and I would like for you to visit the site and send me any comments about the article on Ron Artest. Also, please note, the initial screen may seem racy or explicit, please disregard and click on the woman to get to the article. Also, here is a poem from me called PERCEPTION

    It is a judgment that will always deceive you
    from opening your eyes to the truth.

    People only react to what they hear
    not thinking to ask and lend an ear

    to listen to the truthful version
    all because they hold no respect for this person.

    See, it numbs all faculties in your mind
    and allows you to waste your time

    focusing on issues of miniscule value
    as you think of ways to degrade and devour

    the person who has seemingly done no harm
    but you must prove they are doing wrong

    to save your own **** face
    as you continue to progress in the race.

    But, Ha! the joke is on you
    for as you were doing your dirty doo

    the carpet was pulled from under your eyes
    as you were quickly reduced to a small size

    when "what you think you see"
    made you out to be the fool who was deceived.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome back home tyte drop !
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like whaaaaaaaaaat leaky is back! :)

    welcome back home

    would love to read the article leaky where exactly is it at? lol

    and the drop was fiyah as well :read:
     
  4. angelicsage

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    Great to have you back!

    ..so so true
    Insightful work here


    also...post the link to the article for us, k

    Much love,
    Sage
     
  5. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much thanks

    Thank you $$Rich$$, angelicsage, triniti424 for the warm welcoming and I'm sorry for omitting the website, it's www.dienamicmagazine.com.
     
  6. Khasm13

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    welcome back gurl...i will definately check that piece out....oh and by da way
    tyte poem....
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome home Leaky, clearly you have eyes that see!
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa! Way to make an entrance. Love this tightness - welcome back! :jumping:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome back...tight drop!!!! i for one enjoyed it