Black Poetry : IM BACK!!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deep_lyrikz, Jun 15, 2004.

  1. deep_lyrikz

    deep_lyrikz Member MEMBER

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    Yo wazzup this ya boy deep_lyrikz,
    I got flow from my fro to my spirit,
    I feel that you people really gotta hear it,
    and if not.... oh well..... you know I still wont stop spittin lyriks,
    Im still gone rock, pop, roll, and ball outta control,
    You know... Im a changed man,
    Hollows spittin to my vest out the kay man,
    Yo shots out to Jam master Jay man,
    He got blazed with k cause some one had wished him away,
    But a ********* *** with me then he gonna have to pay,
    But not his life but I'll kill him on the mic and show him im a villian,
    forget syrup i sip on penicilin,
    and im to colder than ice so yall can say im chillin,
    Im a champ so i guess im still winning,
    deep_lyrikz gots hoes so i guess he pimpin,
    I hit yall up later than mabey youll listen.


    -ONE-
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow welcome back !!
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...we see that you are back
    Great flow of energy...
    this was tyte
    flow on poet...
     
  4. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FOR deep_lyrikz EYES ONLY

    deep_lyrikz, you got verve, I must say my man
    Now come back and stand on the grand stand
    because man you spit str8 ice
    chills my to know you speak into a mic


    deep_lyrikz, SEIZE THE DAY
    GREAT POEM YOU HAVE MADE!
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your pen seems to be red hot, and surely I'm listening....well. thanks for sharing.