Black Poetry : (I'm Back) Take Me Inside Of U

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been a long time,
    Since i last wrote a rhyme,
    I've been striving for a better life,
    It's about time,
    And only god knows why,
    I finally found that I,
    Was in love with a guy,
    Who treated me right,
    So sweet and kind,
    He made me feel, like i was on top of the world,
    So he decided to sing a song for me,
    Baby take me by the hand,
    Let me tell u something,
    U know u're my baby,
    And i am your girl,
    I wouldn't do anything to hurt u,
    Boo I Love U,
    U know I do,
    Anything 4 u,
    U're the most important person in my life,
    No matter what goes on,
    I'll always have time for you,
    Your body is soft as a pillow,
    Your kisses make me wanna envelop in your love,
    U know i want your body tonight,
    U feel so good from inside,
    I just wanna hold u,
    And touch u, all night long,
    And when the mornin comes,
    We can finish where we left off,
    I wanna lick u slow from ya head to ya toes,
    Until u start gettin hot 4 me,
    Not to be freaky,
    Just close your eyes, and don't say a word,
    I'm gonna please you and tease you so right,
    I won't stop, unless u want me to,
    Whatever I do to you, I want u to give it to me,
    So come on baby,
    Show me, show me what it's like,
    Take me inside,
    There's so many ways i can do things,
    So many times, i would like to try again,
    Just to get in the heat of the moment.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome back home sis....
    very lovely write indeed to ya sweetie
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once reconciled, a family is stronger than before.
     
  4. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich And 1poet

    It took me some time to heal, but finally i'm recovered. Thanks for the love once again.

    1 luv,

    AM :kiss:
     
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