Black Poetry : I'm All In

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Jan 21, 2002.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaawwwww; 4 me???

    There's got to
    be a logic-al
    r e a s o n

    why

    there's an
    ~N~
    at the
    end
    of your
    coming
    and going

    Reason

    it's because

    ~N~
    is a part
    of your
    pseudo-name
    pseudo-Soul-dreamer
    of
    underSTANDING
    whatever
    I produce

    UR
    state of mind
    is not bound
    to
    only stars
    that flicker
    when you
    pick them from
    atop the sky

    there's already
    a mood altering
    effect
    that affects
    your condition
    and opens your
    third eye
    while your

    lol

    creeps into my
    page
    whispering
    to my thoughts
    that
    within some
    simple phrase
    you were
    truly amazed

    i c u

    thinking

    i c u

    smiling

    i c u

    being you

    daring to
    dance
    a tribal
    dance
    with

    yours truly,


    N2



    I appreciatez you too!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    N2 da sweetest person i know her soul create vision
    unthinkable and i must agree coz i lose myself N2 one's
    soul ............beautifully written poet!:D :heart: :toast:
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2~ Sweetheart

    I must offer my apologies dear... I didn't forsee your response. I have to be totally honest in letting you know that unfortunately this poem wasn't for you.

    The ~N~'s were merely creative being that the words that I used were not consistent in prefix (In- or En-). I neva thought for once that it would be misinterpreted.

    Know that I will foreva dig what you do ma! and I am a fan of your art. Though your reply was incredible... Please forgive me.
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$
    I ask your forgiveness too brutha! Thanks for peepin dog.

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Luv is Luv

    :eek: What can I say...?? "my badd" :eek:

    Let me be the first to say that "embarassment" has me writin' you a book of apologies heah.
    ..
    Reason.... there's no love loss my brotha..... I still gotz love 4 ya' papi!! Even though this wasn't intended for muuaa (me), you can still accept the piece I kicked out for you. And, ****.......brotha....you could've just kept it goin' ~ must you bust a sistah OUT? :lol: :lol: :lol: :D

    I must say with my pseudonym being a mixture of numbers & letters.....specifically N 2 ur Soul........ brotha, you did use quite a few of them consecutively in that format within your piece (I'm probably not the only one who'da thought you were talkin' bout ol' N2 ur Soul -- $$RICH$$ was in here too)...:lol: ?? ..... don't think I'm vain, .... cause that ain't the case at all......fact is N2 been my pen name since the cow's ran away and came back home...
    and, when I rolled through viewing your first line
    "I'm so N2U"...... It didn't matter if the piece was for me or not.... :lol: you typed my name.... :lol: and that's all she wrote....

    Sorry, I guessed I fried this one up from who eva you really intended it to be for..... again, there's no love loss papi.... even if it wasn't intended for me.... the poem spoke directly N2mySoul.... thus, you got yourself a dance partner and a piece from me to you in return~


    Remember.... luv is luv!
    :D

    N2
     
  7. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason, honey...

    that was a real sweet scribe. I am sure that she appreciates ur spoken words.

    Well said.

    Blk Kween ;)
     
  8. GQ

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    Reas - Now come on Dawg!!!!

    Ya know ya gotz 2 b mo' careful when ya spit love lines like this!!!

    Honies, along wit articles of clothing, drop bro!!!! :laugh:

    Tight ta def flow!!!! :toast:

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WBMPW.


    ... hahaha.... i loved this piece!! :D

    hae i told you late-ly that i am soooo N2U
    & that thing you do... wit words??

    LuvU4Life.
    SunShower~
     
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    tyte 'N'deed.