Black Poetry : Illusions of a mystery

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just something that was running in my mental.....
    hope yall enjoy

    Illusions of a mystery plays
    Within sight..i see
    The transparent of you
    The nakedness of your soul
    As we fold in luxuries
    Of our destiny…
    As I open up and give you me
    Flowing in your essence
    As we walk pass the sexuality
    In to the mental stimulation
    Enhancing the moment
    Becoming one….
    With conversation
    On the edge…….
    Feelin the depth of your
    soul reaching into mine.
    Touchin my heart and
    open up a new world
    holding my hand
    each step of the way…..
    Illusions of a mystery plays
    Within sight..
    Twisted in a sweet romance
    Far apart but as one
    In a yell of a whisper
    Within a hush love cries
    A sweet melody
    Alive… the strength of me is you
    Can we
    Together
    Make it
    And grow…

    ablkangel thang..2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe felt the motions releasing
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetly laid scribe.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall
    :angel1:
     
  5. caramelpython

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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
    Illusion is a mistery best viewed and never to be held.
    wonderful free pen!
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow sis
    loving the drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall
     
  8. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really sweet
    love the way you layed it down

    one
    /antar
     
  9. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey miss blk im starting to apperciate the things you write this is
    very beautiful ever where i look i see my self in it
    this is a masterpiece you proably wasnt lookin for that but it came
    keep the pen and pum ya fist and always love them kids of yours first


    u r infact a tru writer
     
  10. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    mzblkangel

    Beautiful...marvelous...delicious...yet yummy. It is u....

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
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