Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, May 22, 2008.
glad u found ur pen...
and writing again........
why the madd smiley as oppos'd to the fiya one? lol
i haven't found anything there will be no more for a good while
and the madd smiley is actually not mad to me but a face of defiance
so i see it more like that
j/k bout the smiley ... ease up meany!
(plus u gotta write, so we can get rid of some of the about to get bann'd material..... it is overwhelming)
ease dese lol
will you stop
i was just explaining the face because i've been asked i thousand times, i'm not mad
i just let people know it's a term of defiance as opposed to mad for me
that all if i'm meany (and i ain't mad)
then you're Q-tip
all sensitive and ish
you know it's all love chump
Now, you slammed this piece, with ink hitting the page like a hammer. High props to ya poet.
Hi Da Street So'ja
Very deep drop.
To the point.
The hand is quicker then the eye
So many things going on now.
It seem like it all happen over night, prices sky high and increasing
This is a eye opener drop.
Feeling you on this here
Illusionati...Not a Game
Not On game
Till you forget your name
Then... Remember you had one
Long ago, but were told never again
and they sell your soul
Like it's their own
Grab your children
Cuz their on their own
Their eyes are all wong
It all over
You Didn't Know
They have you
They want more
Take your Mind
and Screw it some more
Illusionati gets you
Before you are born
All I can say is.....
thank you pham
SOULOSOPHY - i don't think you had to read it a "few" times, because you are
very gifted lol thank you for the comment i'm usually ahead of myself
so time is the factor now
WATZINANAME - thank you for you comment appreciated very much
BLUEWATER - that's what this is all about, some people say seeing is believing
but we can't "see" oxygen but we breath it everyday, would die without it
so......................, but what you see is it really REAL?
PLAT - thank you for the piece i didn't know i could inspire you like that lol
all i can say is i see you get it, nice powerful response just how i like them
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR RESPONSES
Great piece poet, your pen did leaps and bounds on this one...^5
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