Black Poetry : ILLUSIONATI

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  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    bvsdf
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    glad u found ur pen...

    and writing again........

    why the madd smiley as oppos'd to the fiya one? lol
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i haven't found anything there will be no more for a good while

    and the madd smiley is actually not mad to me but a face of defiance

    so i see it more like that
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    WHY NOT?

    j/k bout the smiley ... ease up meany!

    (plus u gotta write, so we can get rid of some of the about to get bann'd material..... it is overwhelming)
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ease dese lol


    will you stop

    i was just explaining the face because i've been asked i thousand times, i'm not mad

    i just let people know it's a term of defiance as opposed to mad for me

    that all if i'm meany (and i ain't mad)

    then you're Q-tip

    all sensitive and ish

    hahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahha

    you know it's all love chump

    lol
     
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    Now, you slammed this piece, with ink hitting the page like a hammer. High props to ya poet.
     
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    Hi Da Street So'ja
    Very deep drop.
    To the point.
    The hand is quicker then the eye
    So many things going on now.
    It seem like it all happen over night, prices sky high and increasing

    This is a eye opener drop.
    Feeling you on this here

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Illusionati...Not a Game

    Not On game
    Till you forget your name

    Then... Remember you had one
    Long ago, but were told never again
    and they sell your soul
    Like it's their own


    Grab your children
    Cuz their on their own

    Illusion captured
    Their eyes are all wong

    JACKPOT
    BINGO

    It all over
    You Didn't Know

    They have you
    They want more
    Take your Mind
    and Screw it some more

    Illusionati gets you
    Before you are born

    All I can say is.....



    RUUUUUUUUNNN!!!!
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you pham

    SOULOSOPHY - i don't think you had to read it a "few" times, because you are
    very gifted lol thank you for the comment i'm usually ahead of myself
    so time is the factor now

    WATZINANAME - thank you for you comment appreciated very much

    BLUEWATER - that's what this is all about, some people say seeing is believing
    but we can't "see" oxygen but we breath it everyday, would die without it
    so......................, but what you see is it really REAL?

    PLAT - thank you for the piece i didn't know i could inspire you like that lol
    all i can say is i see you get it, nice powerful response just how i like them
    thank you

    THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR RESPONSES
     
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    Great piece poet, your pen did leaps and bounds on this one...^5