Black Poetry : illogical

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  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Illogical

    Vain...
    Vulnerable...
    Naive...
    Dumb...
    Young...
    In love...
    The things we do for love
    Often defies all logic
    Logic?
    Was I being logical?
    When you slapped me in the face
    Physically put me in my place
    Had me moving at an unreal pace
    Exploiting me, I was disgraced
    Tell me...was that being logical?
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very descriptive flow.
    Feeling your release
    In this :grouphug:
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man, no that's not logical at all...but it happens, you're right we do and go through some crazy mess when we're in love. really feeling this. much love to you.
     
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    ooo, I am so feelin you. It never makes sense, does it, the way love makes you lose your mind. Nice flow, sister.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop here
    but the answer is within
    flow on
    a emotional
    flow with this question..... :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, the things we do for love. Hopefully we live and learn...very nice drop.
     
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