Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'll Sing You a Love Song

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 8, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll sing you a love song
    melt your mind with sweet
    words of passion, lyrics
    that gently sweep you off your feet
    Sing you a love song
    Put a sonnet to music, flow
    the words onto the page, then
    pour forth the notes so all will know
    Let the melody of a love ballad
    drip passionately from my lips
    as I trace your mouth
    lovingly with my fingertips
    Allow a quiet storm to form from
    the most romantic songs we know
    singing in two part harmony
    your tenor complements my alto
    Romantic rhymes fill the air, I'll
    croon the tune as you hum along
    Baby, I'll make love to your mind
    as I sing you a love song
     
  2. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    SING GIRL SING THAT SONG...LOL,,,,GREAT PIECE ....HOOKUP :flamet: :flamet:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome dip lip singing i can hear it now SANG on !!!
     
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    WOW!!!!

    I overstand...

    my sister...u flowed
    ...there is no more that can be said

    Loved this part of it...

    Let the melody of a love ballad
    drip passionately from my lips
    as I trace your mouth
    lovingly with my fingertips
    Allow a quiet storm to form from
    the most romantic songs we know
    singing in two part harmony
    your tenor complements my alto



    *ENCORE*

    Awesome Work!​
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL Hookup, I'll keep singing that song.
    I'll try to sang it loud and clear, Rich. Thank you brotha.
    Sage you know how to make a poet smile. Thank you for letting me know you're overstanding this piece sis.
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight, tight, tight!!! Gurl you done did it again. mmm mmmm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your props on this gempis. I appreciate your support sis.
     
  8. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl why you gotta go and make the birds feel bad? nightingale of love that was amazing ma sistah!!!! sing on and testify!!!!

    much love. :wchair: :skate:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was quite a nice compliment plainrhythm, I thank you for that so much poet.
     
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