Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'll Remember You asYou Will Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Mar 7, 2004.

  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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  2. ille$t poete$$

    ille$t poete$$ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    this was hot...i luv'd tha way u posed this...nice nice flow! keep em' comin.... :spin:
    *1 luV*
    -tha ille$t :peace:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    likes this indeed
    it was hot
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!

    This really took my breath away! Oh yes it did! :grouphug:
    Thanks for such a sweet piece!
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  5. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re:to Keita

    Great poem internet poet
    I greatly adored the metaphores
    Continue to post your masterpieces

     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my love will follow you...wherever you go
    I've never stoped loving you :luvv: ...didn't you know?

    yes, remembering you is the easy part...
    cause I'll be left here...without a heart.

    The pittbulls are tired of being on post...so...
    let's stop all the bulls#"...and have a big toast. :luvv:

    that was a beautiful poem keita
     
  7. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte

    The floE so mellow...so smooth...so beautiful and so much more...
    I love it!!!!!
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    I remember walking through your heart,
    amazed at the walls and floors...
    surprised and shocked by the many locked doors.



    All I can say is WHOA!!!!! I am feelin this deeply on so many levels. This is just phenomenal, Keita. Much love and many props for shining your light on the issue.
     
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    "PHENOMENAL"...that's all I can say..."PHENOMENAL"
     
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    wonderful peace
    it just took
    my breathe
    away...yes
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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