Quiet Poetry Lounge : I'll Make Sweet Love to You...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1SensualBrotha, Jan 28, 2007.

  1. 1SensualBrotha

    1SensualBrotha Member MEMBER

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    ...For I know you need to be loved, and to feel sweet.
    I will admire your presence, your soul, your very essence.
    I will glide my fingertips across your body,
    Feeling its texture—so smooth to the touch.
    I will kiss you a thousand times,
    Letting you feel the warmth of my lips.

    I will look into your eyes,
    Letting you see the love I give you,
    And that you so quickly receive.
    I can feel the sensitivity of your love,
    Wet, soft, and throbbing with anticipation.

    I will tease you endlessly,
    Until you can’t take it anymore;
    Then, I’ll enter your love with my love,
    So that OUR love becomes ONE!

    I’ll go slow, ensuring that nothing goes wrong.
    I’ll make you feel as though you never knew
    What gravity felt like.
    I will lift you to the highest of high,
    Without ever letting you down;
    Then, I will let you will grab my hand,
    And guide me to where you are.

    When I have almost made it,
    I will look deep into your eyes,
    So you can see,
    Just how HIGH your love has made me.


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  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im high off this write right now! tasty and hot this was! keep em coming my brotha!
     
  3. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    T'was a very tite and sensous write.
     
  4. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew, cold cold shower anyone, I felt the fire if this piece, very sensual and romantic.
     
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