Black Poetry : "I'll Give You More........."

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: :smokin: I've never felt this way before,
    Seems like heaven just opened its doors,
    Waiting for me to enter,
    Into your world of love and pleasure,
    U want me so badly
    And i've never thought i get this chance,
    To get to know ya, to get to hold ya,
    To feel you, yes its true,
    U need someone to love,
    I'll give u more than what u want,
    Just wait and see.........
    Say u'll stay with me,
    Promise u'll never leave,
    Nite or day or.......
    My side, I'm......


    Arriving at your doorstep,
    Giving u the greatest hug there is,
    So i look into your eyes,
    I love the way u make me smile,
    A tear comes out of my eye,
    U say everything is alright,
    All i want to do is please you,
    Cause i see,
    U need someone to love, I'm.....


    Willing to give u a chance,
    To show how much a man u are,
    My life i dedicate to you,
    My shining star,
    Hear me what i'm saying,
    The truth shall be told,
    I want u, u want me,
    Say u'll stay with me always,
    Promise u'll never leave,
    Nite or day, or
    My Side
    Tan
    Trum


    Someone to love
    To be there,
    When i need ya the most,
    Take my hand and i'll lead u the way,
    Enter my gate,
    Of ecstacy,
    Aaliyah will be waiting............................



    Aaliyahmonet
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhh this so sweeeeeeeeeeeettttttttt!!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second that though, this was such a sweet read :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Give me u
    is all i need
    a beauty a queen
    indeed to please
    i never knew this
    would be that
    my love will call
    for thee

    It feel so divine
    deep in my mind
    i wonder how u feel
    and the love u pose
    what a thrill i instill
    i need u i promise
    to never leave
    always there to listen
    and please you
    give u what u wish
    and u be my daily dish

    O' how i wish upon that star
    that true love come from da
    sky has my Angel arrived
    to my suprise my my my !!
    i need a hug a kiss & squeeze
    as i give it all back in three's
    my heart never felt this way
    until u came my way
    i so want to love u deeply
    caress u completely
    unconditionally , i call u
    beckon for u coz i love u
    i need you, doors open

    I'll be in the love room
    just below my bedroom
    beside the candle light
    table wine , dinner too
    bedded in roses just 4 you
    soft sweet soundz round
    da room my gurl Aaliyah
    singing this tune
    baby my valentine just say
    tonight ur be mines........
     
  5. Chris Tudda

    Chris Tudda New Member MEMBER

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    :hi: :hi: Hi! I'm new in town and I have to say that this is a nice write. Look forward to many more like it.
     
  6. Versatile

    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang that was hot from both of you all.....
     
  7. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thanks versatile, just keepin it real. I'll be lookin out 4 ya.

    1 luv,

    AM :)
     
  8. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    nice piece poet................

    diggin da flow!!
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this alot...
     
  10. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just go ahead and give wrap the panties.
    just playin'!!!!
    I love this!
     
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